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    FIRST KISS

    I was a little kid
    maybe 6 or 7 years old
    and behind our house
    was a trailer
    and in the trailer
    lived a girl my age.
    Her name was
    Tracy.

    We were friends,
    always playing in
    my backyard.
    One time, I had a
    large bandage on my nose
    from an unfortunate knife incident
    and she defended me
    on the school bus
    when one of the older kids tried
    to be a funny guy.

    I don't know what got into me
    but
    one day
    we were in my bedroom
    crouched beside my dresser
    and I was able to get her to
    kiss me.

    It was a
    quick
    peck
    on the lips
    and when that second was over
    we laughed.

    I told her,
    "Let's kiss longer like on tv."
    but she said no
    and shook her head
    and laughed.
    Then we went outside to play.

    One night, there was a commotion outside.
    I looked out back.

    Tracy's trailer
    was on
    fire.

    It was put out.
    To my knowledge,
    no one
    was hurt. But

    I never saw her again after that.

    So if you're reading this,
    Tracy,
    I hope everything wound up
    ok
    for you.

    And
    thanks
    for the
    kiss.
    It's one of the
    few things
    I remember from
    that time.

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    smile Nice. Don't really want to get too deep, because that would ruin it. Just...nice. smile

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    I like it. smile

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    Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter.
    The one called "brain".
    I stare at the grace of this magnificent place.
    "Please, kiss me before I die."

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    I like it too smile

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    - "How do you know the chosen ones? No greater love hath a man than he lay down his life for his friend. Not for millions, not for glory, not for fame... for one person. In the dark. Where no one will ever know or see." - Sebastion, Babylon 5
    - Really I am a woman...honest!
    - Oh, and I really like women too
    - Resident KiSA (Knight in Shining Armor!)

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